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winter haiku

cat footprints lead nowhere
the toolshed's roof begins
to gather snow

wind howls
how warm the skin
beneath his flannel collar

streetlights
cast long shadows
on the silent church

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  • EstherG
    January 15
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    This is beautiful. I haven't been on here for far too long.

    I love, particularly: "cat's footprints lead nowhere" - simple, captivating, lovely. (And true! my cats leave little paddy-paws all through the snow, and you can't tell where they started or where they go).

    Gorgeous.

    Did you have a nice Christmas? I keep meaning to myspace you and not getting round to it. X


  • porksnorkel
    December 30, 2008
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    how warm the skin beneath his flannel trousers


  • bobanonymous gold member
    December 21, 2008
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    bright moments!