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what it really is

the serpents tongue spits a web of angry lies
taking her to where she cries
promises of love
of treatment from above
of happiness and truth
taking her beautiful youth
draining her feeling so old
one day she wakes up and realizes its her soul she sold
the devil's laying in her bed
its finally here, the day she dread
tricked into something untrue
told her it was real but he knew
love is just a myth
the best to rip you apart with

let me know what u think and any suggestions for a title would b nice too lol

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