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make me believe

my hearts already in a bind
there's no "love" of your kind
all those years i wanted to believe
i couldn't take the pain i had to leave
you come to me now
now you want me to believe, tell me how
believe you're right
trying to make me see you saw the light
was it a light or just a flash
another opportunity to treat me like trash

let me know what u think and any suggestions for a title would b nice too lol

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