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Magic Love

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Its feelings from my heart
Which I need to write
Worded tokens I convey
Both in love and light

Words written in sincerity
With continuous flow
Hoping to keep in touch
The only way I know

Each poem of love written
I send on over to you
As we are oceans apart
This is all I could do

As with every word I write
The feelings are true
Love flows continuously
In heartprints for you

Author notes

What is Love for you?
I am looking for writes on Love that
focus on commitment nurtured by freedom.

This is the prompt.
I encourage you to discover a gateway to love unknown to you

Okay so I need to tell you that I thought outside the box on this one. I twisted it a bit. Do you like if not I will rewrite for you. Because you said freedom I thought why not long distance. Sure brings a lot of trust in to it. Just a thought.

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Comments


  • isabellacohen
    December 29, 2008

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    I like it

    I like yur poem, thanks for submitting,
    a beautiful way of connecting with a loved one from a distance,i liked the flow,
    thanks for enetering and for taking the prompt into account

    best wishes,
    Isabella


  • Night-lord
    December 19, 2008

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    I agree and liked how you pinned this one well written the best you have conveyed emotionally and you took more chances with it great job love it thank you