Anonymous letter to everyone
On
Earth:
If there were diamonds in my blood
You’d cut my
Throat.
or maybe you'd just smile
when I get punched in the face
your eyes like headlights
when you see me
getting stabbed
in the "get by" streets
just hoping for a stray soccer ball
to catch me
in the fucking
nose.
Bitch please,
I got a beautiful nose.
please, please
put down your knives,
don't put rocks in the snowballs,
don't swing a baseball bat
and
claim you that were too drunk
to know...
but you wont...
or maybe,
would you be that one,
that rare one..
that would ask me to wear pads
when I played football,
that would give me a band-aid
to keep in my pocket,
that would hold me while I cried,
I swear on anything
I'm gonna hold you
I'm gonna hold you when you cry!
Yeah, yeah,
just put down the needle
and lift up my heart..
is there anyone?
anyone at
all...
Author notes
I'm drinkin heavy again.. it makes a fucker romantic
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you're opening two stanzas carry the strength of the poem, very intense
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Heh Lol
Sort of anger in this poem but it's still good.
^^
"or maybe,
would you be that one,
that rare one..
that would ask me to wear pads
when I played football,
that would give me a band-aid
to keep in my pocket,
that would hold me while I cried,
I swear on anything
I'm gonna hold you
I'm gonna hold you when you cry!"
^^ Like this part betta....
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would you be that one,
that rare one..
that would ask me to wear pads
when I played football,
that would give me a band-aid
to keep in my pocket,
that would hold me while I cried,
I swear on anything
I'm gonna hold you
I'm gonna hold you when you cry!
*hands a bandaid to you* lovely poem.. just amazing....
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"would you be that one,
that rare one..
that would ask me to wear pads
when I played football,
that would give me a band-aid
to keep in my pocket,
that would hold me while I cried,
I swear on anything
I'm gonna hold you
I'm gonna hold you when you cry!"
of course there's someone... don't let all that hurt get in the way of searching for them. you are cared about now and will be even more when you meet that rare person who cares so much about you the beauty of it all with make your heart ache.
xxx
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Between admiring how beautifully you write out your thoughts and feelings, and wishing I could indeed send you a band aid, I can only say that I do care, and I hope you will soon find someone who can show love and caring in person, and not just on paper (or screen!) Keep writing!
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your comments are always so lovely, thank you!
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would you be that one,
that rare one..
that would ask me to wear pads
when I played football,
that would give me a band-aid
to keep in my pocket,
that would hold me while I cried,
I swear on anything
I'm gonna hold you if you cry!
would you put down the needle
and lift up my heart?
is there anyone?
any one at
all...
this is beautiful.
and i think there is
theres someone.
<3
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... Awe.
Alas, I am going to have to call you... silly, you know I care about you, a ton! Don't forget this...
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never ever, love. call me!
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;}}}
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