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Elements of love

Join me here to view the matrix,
Great energy at it's apex.
Join me in this well of passion.
Stand by me in this grand mansion.
This is the place that we've named love.
Some say it's from angels above.
Since I don't see it in this way,
For you in this poem I'll say.

It is the fire that sparks and shines.
It's immolation takes the mind.
It is the flame that consumes all.
With it you feel you cannot fall.

It is the water that sweeps through.
Cleansing all showing your soul true.
The great ocean so vast and pure.
Leaving the lies washed on the shore.

It's the wind that blows you away.
The rush that can make your mind fray.
The hurricane of emotions.
The fast & wild revelations.

It is the earth mighty and strong.
The very place all life is thronged.
The great creator of all life.
& great endurer of all strife.

This is the matrix I call love.
The mansion some think's from above

Getting there XD

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  • queen Moderators member
    June 7

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    I like this a lot, i think you did a fantastic job. The last two lines are my favorite well done poet


  • ladyhelenaofsorrows
    December 19, 2008

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    great imagery here....
    i like this, but the rhyme takes away from what is otherwise really well done. there is a typo in the last line, overall great write!