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You Think I'll Crack Before You Do.

Mental illness
It isn't nice is it?
You lie there devastated,
With defeat.
And I smile my wicked smile
I've done it all before.
I watch the wetness
Kiss your swollen cheeks,
And I wipe them dry
With a celebrated hand.
It's your turn, darling.

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PureAmethyst

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  • Mr Id
    December 21, 2008

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    How delightfully dark, wkithout being emo.

    Great work- the last line's coolio!

    Good luck in contest!


  • LoveLikePoetry
    December 19, 2008

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    This is really good, I like it
    It's short and simple, which is always nice
    Thanks for entering and good luck


  • LoveLikePoetry
    December 19, 2008
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    You Think I'll Crack Before You Do