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By the Deep Sea

There is pleasure in the white sands
There is rapture on the lonely shore
By the deep sea there is a quite melody

Melodious sounds of ebbing waters
The poetry of earth is lingering 
Beckoning to those who honor

The solitary peace of nature
Freedom is found on the wings
Of sea birds of the air

The winds of centuries have sculpted
Twisted majestic  oaks
A place no human made

Trees with arms lifted to heaven
Wild flowers paint a breathless
Still life on far fields untilled

Splendor’s colors showered on earth
Nature’s gift to humanity


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  • Lady Dragonwyck
    January 4
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    I love nature writes. This is so vivid and lovely.

    Lady D


  • Angelflower
    December 21, 2008

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    This was a wonderful write for the picture.. You truly brought something that touched the reader, it was soft and just, beautiful.. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

    Angel


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    excellent!!

    I love this piece from you here hon! I really enjoyed reading and good luck to you in the contest


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    How well you captured the wonder of the sea and the beauty there of. Perfect poem for this pic!