Don't look back,
resist the temptation -
walk away with nothing.
Why is it sooo hard?
What pulley system are we on
to where we go and come back?
A consience confuses us
into submission while we think
and then we are back at square one.
Who must I kill,
to make a clean break ?
Author notes
A new year comes and I wonder which will I walk away from?
In a list
What to do in an insane world?
Comments
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lol... clean breaks are hard. You may have to settle for a dirty one. Especially after reading your authors nots. Sounds like you are "torn between two lovers". Never a clean break situation.
The language and wording are compelling. You misspelled "conscience" but other than that I would say the poem is darned near perfect.
Write on, poet.
Blessings,
Myth
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Not me
Who ever it is it had better not be me. I like this one as well. I like the visuals it brings up. Good on ya!
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