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Pain? or Pleasure?

Flesh tearing
Blood pouring
Heart beating
Faster faster
Wound throbbing
Your face is smiling
You know this is wrong what your doing
Breath comes in gasps
Tissue ripping
Pulling it over and over again and again
People looking down their snobbish noses at you
You say you don't care
As you turn from the stares
And your back at it again
Your knife
And i turn you around
And ask and say does it bring pain? or pleasure?
Blankly staring
I hear not a word
As you go back to work
Flesh tearing
Blood pouring
Heart beating
Tunnel vision closing in
As
You
Die

what do you think this is really about?

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  • Content
    December 19, 2008
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    wow, wth??? i hope i never get ms. bush as an english teacher


  • Missa
    December 19, 2008
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    thats...really really freaky. [[just to let you know that]]

    • ruthie fallen angel
      December 19, 2008
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      srry i was bored during the english final cause i finished like WAY before everyone else so i had the idea and i ran with it