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Soul Searching by Selfexpressive.

Soul searching by Selfexpressive.

Right now feels like my soul is searching;
To find that inner peace that once was there,

Things seem so hard lately; so many tears shed,
I need to find that inner strength; the one that is inside,

To help me right now and lift me from this darkness;
I can’t go on hurting my beloved husband and children,

It’s just not right; why do things engulf me so much?
Why affect me like they do? Why not just wash over me?

I crave the inner freedom of not having such things affect me!
So please; please inner strength come out and help set me free!

Namaste Selfexpressive.

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  • kareneisenlord gold member
    January 23

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    oh, hon - I so feel your pain

    "To help me right now and lift me from this darkness;
    I can’t go on hurting my beloved husband and children,"

    Don't be so hard on yourself! You are a wonderful wife and mother. I can tell. When we struggle with depression, nothing seems or feels right. I remember times that it took sheer will power to hang in there when my kids were little. You can do it. You are strong! Be strong for your family.

    I hope this finds you better. Hey, you wrote this on my birthday! We have a lot in common. I pray you feel peace and happiness my friend.

    We miss you! Karen


    • Selfexpressive
      February 2
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      Many thanks Karen...

      Many thanks Karen for commenting on my poem, I'm sorry I haven't been about, I haven't been too well again also had that camera down my throat last week which again was an awful experience, I hope to start writing again as I haven't done any from Christmas... I am hard on myself ... always have been though I guess thats just me, I didn't realise I wrote this on your birthday and I do send you much belated birthday wishes and pray you had a good day... I hope to catch up with you soon, love,

      Selfexpressive.