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Show of the Crow

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We looked up as the eerie dusks embark,
towards canopy perches adorned in the trees.
There, a link of individuals calling to each
gradual, by sly interpretation, intending malice.

As mystery divulges the duration of black till dawn
within a claw vaguely distributed to the evil I dread,

there is a somewhat minds eye speculative,

playing games that leaves a second thought prying,

harsh enough to have it comprehend the situation.  


From man and his own evil conquerings
transcending into theories like no other group,
time was to highlight the power of their many instincts

and we're looking across like those crow were - at us!
psychological battles play with an open suggestion.

Converging into the free range radicals, invite
had layed out per notice from a threatening why.

 

Like phantoms protecting each to their own,

the vicinity of black capes adorn menacing beaks,

enormous size, was that to the vulgarity plegde;

or stuborness, man himself needs reminding.

 

Stark reminders overthrow the turn of a head,

as if oblivion were for his quandary to enquire.

 

Hynotism is the psyche of haunted illusion,

talons drawn, while masterly curvatures  

pervade a shrew to tend to that we find so cute.

Crows! Damn the things, scoundrels of inept,

ludicrous to say the least how arduous they are.

Unlike the mongrel society we scorn human-like,

though it is unusual this impeccable record

which shows an obedience level measured since.

over mans' inabilitiy to refrain from threatening.

 

Unlike man who has a noise subjective  to that,

which openly ignores, stresses and is uneffected,

in turn, to leave with a return of joyous warblings,

somehow crows have that similar presense, that

while each to their own device lead separate issues,

the bar is highered to usher in this complaint.

 

But, while crows are viewed as this extreme curse,

by any translation of the word, towards mimicking us,

we are therefore no more mimicking these shrews,

that are by now hibernating mimicking our ignorance.

Author notes

Option ii; dark
2. Write me something dark because I luv dark poetry.

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  • Cant force beloved
    December 19, 2008
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    I love crows, I think they have the cutest little walk, I always smile when watching them. I enjoy watching them when perched on the trees too, crows are really very adorable, sometimes annoying, but so are humans.
    I find it hard to hate anything for more than five seconds.

    The poem is quite well written though.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 19, 2008

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    This just makes me so creeped out first i love crows, but i am creeped out by them as well, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest