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Winter Shade (Haiku)

First shade of winter
Colourless snowflakes; so plain,
Yet pearly and pure!

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A haiku about winter & snow.

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  • piccola silver member
    December 23, 2008

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    thank you for entering. this is lovely in it's imagery. In a traditional haiku, there is no upper case or punctuation though.


    • Xox ILY xoX
      December 26, 2008
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      Oh, my apologies. Honestly I guess I should have looked that up. I never realized that in a traditional haiku there isn't any capitalization or punctuation. Thank you for letting me know, though. You learn something new every day, I suppose.

      • piccola silver member
        December 26, 2008
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        when I took the AP class I found out a lot. My lessons were never graded with a perfect score.