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Helter Skelter Sheltered. (Monorhyme)

You are a piece of work
In  fact a total jerk
Possessed of every quirk
Your mission is to irk
In you, Satan does lurk
Confronted, go beserk
Never smile, always smirk
You make my life pure murk.

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  • sheltered
    January 2
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    hehehe...
    you got me pegged
    except i'm almost always smiling

  • jadeangyal
    December 20, 2008

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    Nice. Suggestion: "In you, see Satan lurk" Less forced, maybe? Thanks for the laugh. Is murk a word? Haha.


  • DolceVito gold member
    December 20, 2008
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    LMAO...Excellent take on the prompt.