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Queen Of The Holy Rosary

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Queen of Holy Rosary,

mother of the lamb;

who brought to us Son of God,

our Savior, I Am.

 

Golden roses adorn her,

precious gift of life;

vessel of pureness,

took away all human strife.

 

Gave to humanity,

golden ribbon of divine;

through her His spirit dwells,

maintains His royal line.

 

Peace for mankind,

Mary's message of love;

conversion for all,

a call from above.

 

Divine revelation,

is her promise I'm told;

grace and protection,

that the mysteries hold.

 

Her promise of aid,

she stands by our side;

with glory of God, 

virtue of pride.

 

Send up your prayers

to our lady with love,

the mother of earth

God's gift from above.

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  • Good work

    love it, This is a very well written piece, not hard to follow. a very good write and a wonderful take on Mary the mother of Jesus . very well done I love the form too, keep up the good work a powerful poet Potential There were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see. I look forward to your next one. Another bully for you.
    another Bully for you.


  • DeGraw
    February 16

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    Beautiful.

    A lovely poem, well rhymed with excellent sentiments to Our Lady and Her Son!
    Good luck in the contest.
    Regards,
    DeGraw


  • ourgirlFriday
    February 12
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    Lovely! Congrats on your first win - it was well deserved!


  • Denerica
    February 10

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    This is beautiful to the usual Hail Mary full of Grace prayers, it flowed and was a dedication to a prayer in itself. Lovely and well penned my friend. Blessings.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 2

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    I think that this is a lovely write indeed very nicely penned congrats on your HM best wishes always be well.


  • storiesuntold gold member
    December 22, 2008
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    Beautiful write here

    With our love to all about us we can so make our savior feel our embrace

  • Pietro456
    December 20, 2008
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    Wow I jus tlove you're Poem.

    I love theBlessed MOther as well ! You have paid her high tribut indeed.

  • goalsv
    December 20, 2008
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    Great write, and a wonderful testimony to her. Elevating her before men as to her being chosen to give birth and raise Jesus. For having that much faith she deseverves our respect. We must be cautious to not elevate her above Christ as He is the mediator to God. Wonderful poem.


  • Haygood gold member
    December 20, 2008
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    The Catholics would be proud. Nicelt penned.


  • Violinstrings silver member
    December 19, 2008

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    this is great

    I am so glad you shared this poem with me.
    and others your decription and words are so captivating


  • Vorondwen gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    Beautiful

    You have painted a wonderful portrait of Christ's earthly mother. Mary was the epitomy of faith in God and the picture of obedience. I believe you have done her justice with this poem. Good luck in the contest!


  • Hikari Lady
    December 19, 2008

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    Beautiful, full of faith and purity. I really loved this poem. Even being a Muslim I always loved vergin Mary, she's just so pure and her name brings fourth feelings of calmness and security.
    God bless you

    Love&Peace
    ~Noor

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