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Keys to My Heart

The Soft Beat pains the Tender Heart,
I sit composed at my Respite,
Piano Chords that soothe and calm,
Notes that rend the Silent Self,
a Sound that aches, yet somehow heals,
Ivory bidden, Musical Bliss

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    February 19
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    Awww lovely.
    I do like my good old music. Soothes me.


  • LoveGoneMad
    February 3
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    A great write. well done...


  • Crazy-Love
    December 21, 2008

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    Lovely, this was a short poem, but it said a lot. I especially LOVE how you capitalized certain words. I've always liked that style. Very good write, keep up the writing!

    Crazy-Love♥