She was my best friend,
My worst enemy.
Tried to help her,
But she just traded everything,
For suffering.
And she found herself alone.
They watched the smiling,
Turn into hiding...
But I can still remember what his face looked like,
When I was lying underneath him in the middle of the night.
'Tell me what you know, tell me what you gone and done now.'
3 days no sleeping,
She gave up eating.
She's got to slow down
The world's watching...
The frozen glance,
A single tear.
It's so much much harder,
Than I ever feared.
Standing in the rain,
No matter where I go,
It's still pouring just the same.
Those streets are filled memories,
Some perfect,
But mostly pain.
I've got to let it go,
But I'm the only one to blame.
People around,
Can hardly hear a sound,
A little voice mutters quietly in the distance...
'There's no going back,
To that other place,
That other time.
This stranger now,
Is all you are...!'
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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A good emotional write evocative and heartfelt. Happy trails.


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good
this was good i liked it a nice flow to it though not a total rhyming poem one that fell together nicely it was smooth, full of a painful broken heart though i fear nice work love abigailxx

