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Why?

Your heart once returned my beats
your lips once returned my kiss
hands to hold
hands now cold

Love won,
Love lost
Hearts entwined
now uncrossed..

WHY?!

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Yeah, okay... so i got hurt, bad.

can you understand what I am trying to ask?

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  • such a sad topic and with so few words. I believe that you could ellaborate on this and make it quite a lovely piece...


  • SuicidalxTeddyBear
    December 19, 2008

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    No I never understood btw what are u asking
    And also i shall not love until i can trust but anyway s keep up the good work


    • Li snuffles
      December 30, 2008
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      Fell in love with a guy i knew a long,long time. Fell pregnant then the love just disappeared, we're no longer together. I had 8 weeks left until i was due to have our child. The baby is now 2 months. I'm asking why he left. Why the love died. Why he no longer wants me.

      THank you for your comment...xxx