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Silent Kisses.

Winters soft blanket
Kisses the welcoming earth
Falling so sweetly.

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  • retribusive
    December 28, 2008

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    Not too bad of a poem.

    Hint though, your title clashes with the poem itself. In a short, you can count the title as a "bonus" few words. A good title can really leave that lasting impression. The repetitiveness doesn't work for me.

  • piccola silver member
    December 23, 2008
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    Oh this is lovely. Thank you so much for entering, it was a pleasure to read.