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Broken Voices.

Silent whispers
Delude my head
Darkness calls fondly
And I am still here.
Your broken voice touches me
Swims through the knotted promises,
Of my mind.
I thrive on your hunger for me.

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  • Jesann gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    Great write.
    Wonderful wording..can feel the emotion through the poem
    Love the lines...
    "Swims through the knotted promises,
    Of my mind"
    Well done.


  • Amber Lee
    December 19, 2008
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    very nice write!