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My Mind Garden

Growing dreams in my head
Like flowers on a bush...

Growing ideas in my mind
A garden of my own doing.

Beautiful each thing is
My sparkling rosy dreams

My forget-me-not ideas
Are the best planting seeds.

Stunning, singing birds, give me
Some ideas flow from their mouth.

My favorite garden buddies
Are the original ones that help.

My mind blooms incredible things
Beautiful smiles, rainbow streams

Unicorns with fabulous style
Tame lions walk all around...

But my favorite garden animal
A dog, loyal, company it brings.

 

Skies Purple,Pink, Bluish Tints

Rainbows, animal clouds, shapes

 

Beauty travels all over in it

Pathway, after pathway

 

Grassy, stone, cobble, and more

Marble sweetness leading before me.

 

Smells of wondrous, fresh like rain

Sunny days that leave no Pain.

 

 

This all happens as my mind blossoms
I think of all Good and no Evil.

I am the Gardener of all things
I am the maker of my own dreams.

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I like this prompt a lot!!

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  • You were right. It made me smile. If this is a discription of your mind as a garden, well, it sounds right. I fear you are my opposite. My mind is all in shadows but don't worry that doesn't mean its as bad as it sounds. There is still light and it is made brighter by the dark. Thank you for a ray of light.
    Guardian Warrior.


  • outofsadness
    December 30, 2008
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    It reads soooooooooo much smoother now

  • outofsadness
    December 30, 2008

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    I'm glad you like the prompt!

    There are some things I didn't really understand in the poem though; the capitalization in particular seemed to distract the reader from what you were actually saying, yknow? I really appreciate that you took the time to enter my contest though, and I liked that you wrote a positive poem because it seems all I've been reading lately are depressing ones. It was refreshing to see that somebody in this world is happy! lol


  • She burns
    December 19, 2008
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    Your anthem!!!

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