If you can love me and walk away
Theres nothing sacred anymore,
Stop and think about the days
Love was worth fighting for
Till death us do part
Just another line thrown in
A promise means forever
But forever is bathed in sin
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Remember the days where promises were promises
Sacred vows now torn in two
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Fade Out, ride out into the night
Fade In, burning inroads through the light
Hear the choirs screaming
Fighting for your return
Hear the screams grow louder
Begging for that sacred vow
Hollow words of promised hope
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Just burn all the non-believers
Nothing's impossible, When everythings possible
Embrace all light which you believe
Destiny is all in your hands
This life I have returned
Hate delivered back my soul
Have you ever cried this hard
Realising with me, you were whole
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Our destiny lies in forever
And forever is our today
Seize the night, time left remaining
Go out live the day
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Bitter words and blackened skies
Poison our minds and fade to grey
Pushing through these broken vows
When will forever come? Who can say...
Don't let them slide from your grasp
Don't let your friends slip away...
You'll wake up in the morning
And wish it went this way.
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Our destiny lies forever
And forever is our today
Seize the night, all our time left
Go out into the fray
Author notes
This was written a long time ago, Infact, so long ago I found it on a floppy disk haha! Enjoy
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"If you can love me and walk away
Theres nothing sacred anymore,
Stop and think about the days
Love was worth fighting for"
<-- that was so very wise, and if only more couples who were going through issues would think back to their wedding days, and try to remember why they got married in the first place
particularly when there are children involved...
Very well written, thanks for entering. -
cool
marvolous work. you did an excellent job at this poetic insight that you named uhh something weird. what do you mean by "version 1.3" anyways is there a number of different forms to this poem or is it just called "version 1.3" for an actual title name? -
wow!! I really enjoyed reading this. Especially the lines:
If you can love me and walk away
Theres nothing sacred anymore,
Stop and think about the days
Love was worth fighting for
Till death us do part
Just another line thrown in
A promise means forever
But forever is bathed in sin
Great job!! Keep writing ya. Cheers!!
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