Whatever i write is going to blow
with that said,
i shall put on a show.
Keep in mind this little ditty
was meant
to be nice and witty.
Marky, you deserve the stars
but i can
only offer you candy bars.
Abstract a must
or this will
turn out to combust.
Candles and cake
Coke and Jack
or perhaps straight.
Love to my brother
another year past
worry not
my huggles will last.
love ya
~Lisa~
Author notes
HAPPY BIRTHDAY HUGGLES!!!!!!!!!
Yea Yea i can hear the laughing....
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday!!!! (~markgrif~) by PerfectImperfection.
1350 points, ended January 7, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awww that is very sweet! Humorous and very thoughtful. Nicely done! Thank you for your entry!
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Something different but always warm and soft wishes came out of your poetical heart. Nicely done.
~Sonja~
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great work
good luck in the contest
love it
btw your picture is very pretty
so jealous of your hair color -
Ha!
Love this rhyme, Lisa. One of your wittiest ones yet.
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But we're laughing WITH you...
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Nicely done for Markie's B-day present. Did he ask you to rhyme or something? 
That puts you out of your element doesnt it? Scott
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Thankies!
You are sweet.
I loved it.
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This is so cute! Great thought for Mark
on his big day. Thanks a lot for sharing it here
and all the best to you with it!
Jeremy0826
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