the snow of winter
will melt away in the spring-
why look there's my bike
Author notes
~Brazos~
A contest entry
- snow haiku by piccola.
700 points, ended December 23, 2008, 47 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Haiku by Kathraina.
900 points, ended January 5, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
no questions
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wow daddY i like this B i see you snatched your percentage of green in this one at well darling
congrads
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excellent~
Great ku you have here
Congrats on the previous trophy
Best of luck in this one..its a winner in my book
I posted a new one too do hope you come see me
Hugs
Susan~~~
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haha so adorable!
♥ Kathraina -
Nicely crafted.
Congrats on the Bronze.
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Very clever haiku. We just had our first snowfall. It lasted 2 days and was gone
I hope for more but am doubtful that we will get any.
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oh oh oh only you my darling cowboy only you I was teary eyed over silly things now I am laughing and going to bed. good night you . you win with me always.
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well that a lot of snow you got there no wonder your bike went unseen for awhile....I love this haiku.......strong expressions.......excellent write...Novy
holiday to you
I love you
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Very Well worded
and makes me laugh at myself - been there, done that.
Good Luck in the Contest
Wind Walker
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lol, I liked this...thank goodness ya found your bike
All the best in contest
~sugar~
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Well done. All sorts of mysteries are unearthed when the snow melts.
Best of luck to you!
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that is so cute.
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