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Dream Waltz

Hearing a waltz in my dream, I’m dancing.
Gliding across the floor, like I was flying,
greeted by your smile, I watch you advancing
directly towards me, dart straight, without trying.
Yielding to your embrace, I find romancing,
grasping your heart’s the beat that leaves me sighing.

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  • individuality gold member
    September 13

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    a good piece of poetry penned, ah let the mnd continue dancing forermore inside the crazy shapes that are dreams, and love, as bold as a sigh, as fine as rhythm.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 27, 2008

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    Aww...this is cute.
    Well-expressed.

    Thanks for your entry.

    Harrisham Minhas