i hate the world , it's secrets divine
your heart is pure , unlike mine
the windows break , glass falls to the floor
and i would sweep it under the door .
to the left of my chest , there's a heart that's beating
even though i'm blind and my hair is receeding
i live in an asylum , and my name is mary jane
i'm not hitting the target , so please fix my aim .
my eyes , aflame
from the secrets , from the pain
and to this day , we share the blame
for the monster i became
to the left of my chest , there's a heart that's beating
even though i'm blind and my hair is receeding
i live in an asylum , and my name is mary jane
i'm not hitting the target , so please fix my aim .
mary jane is a monster gal
she ate my soul , devoured it all
i don't know what i did to piss her off
but i won't ever do it again .
to the left of my chest , there's a heart that's beating
even though i'm blind and my hair is receeding
i live in an asylum , and my name is mary jane
i'm not hitting the target , so please fix my aim .
Comments
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This is somehow reminding me of the book THROUGH THE LOOKING GLASS by Carroll Lewis!
Beautifully written and nice Flow.
Keep Up The Good Work. -
Good job!! Like the flow and rhyme. But i feel the 5th stanza needs a little burshing up, otherwise, it was quite nice and all
Keep writing ya. Cheers!!



