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Please Don't Disappear

You can't be serious.
This can't be real.
It can't exist...

But it does.

Harsh reality sets in
And I reject the truth.

If I ignore it
It will
It has to...

Disappear. 

Please.

Don't leave me here.
Don't make me surrender.
Don't force me to cry.

I - I can't go on.

No.
Never.
Don't.
Don't ever.

But you did.

Author notes

Hmm...a bit like my last poem...I seem to be on a weird style binge.

Not sure what I think of this...

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  • x-sweet-sunshine-x
    December 19, 2008

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    ...It deleted my comment... ??

    Anyways, I like it. It is in a different style then usual, but it's still good! And sad But sad poems are usually good poems.

    <= Ok, I'll stop now.

    !

    Sorry, I think I'm getting hyper because of the snow...

    -Paradox (/OXY)


    • liduen silver member
      December 19, 2008
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      SNOW SNOW SNOW SNOW!!! *runs around in circles* YAAAAY!!!!

      *ahem* Anyhoosie...thanks for the comment!