Mind pauses, calculates
and remembers vision,
rekindling time-held honor,
knowing life within a wish
granted; slanted to become
rounded with crisp-edged lore,
impressed with ideas
found lingering upon a shelf of thought.
Image Credit: Book Cover "Beyond Death:
The Gates of Consciousness" by Stanislav Grof
Author notes
Wishing you a Wonderful Birthday!
In a list
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday!!!! (~markgrif~) by PerfectImperfection.
1350 points, ended January 7, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I didn't even notice it was an acrostic at first!!! Very well penned piece of thought for him. A lovely write indeed! Thank you for your entry!
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Thank you for your kind comment, HM, and contest. It has been a pleasure. I am pleased you enjoyed this one and hope Mark had a great birthday. It was a nice thing to do for him. Kudos.
~Pamela 
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Nice Acrostic, I like the pic of going into the light, and the way your write suggests that continuity. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much. ~Pamela
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Oh it's beautiful. Thank you so very much Pamela!
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You are most welcome. I hope you enjoyed all of your birthday treats. ~Pamela
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Very impressive penning indeed.
Creative in stunning colour and taste.
Love the take on the pic
BRILLIANT
Tony
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Thank you.
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"impressed with ideas
found lingering upon a shelf of thought..."
I love this. The ending is first class as is the whole poem for that matter.
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So pleased you enjoyed. I love playing with Acrostic and this contest posed the perfect chance. Thank you again.
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" ... knowing more lives within a wish
granted; ..."
a wonderful, heartfelt line ... great poem and the image goes well with the piece.
thanks and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you so much. I truly appreciate your comments.
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This is a wonderful poem you wrote. Best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you.
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