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Idk

again, why again?
my heart wants to burst
to never feel this pain

every ounce of my love has been poured into us,
into you.
i can only give so  much with little in return.

somewhere deep inside,
not long ago,
i knew you would do this again

-but i decided to go for one more ride
only to be devastated in the end
like every time before.
broken.

i cant cry anymore.

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you hurt me kyle. idk what to say or do but to lay here with no feeling of anything but hurt.

what did u think, what does this mean to u

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  • Justin Stone
    December 19, 2008

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    Your emotion overshadows the message and while this might be a good vent, it is to raw to be a decent poem.


  • HopelessPoet1087
    December 18, 2008

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    this is a wonderful poem... very emotional... and even though i dont know you well.... i hate this person for what hes done to you... because you dont deserve to feel this way....

    if you ever need to talk... im always here to listen.

    great poem!


  • doglover
    December 18, 2008
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