Trapped in these walls.
Losing my sanity.
These walls so blurred.
Colors mixing..blurring.
Is this real or am i losing my mind.
Trapped in these walls for so long.
I cannot tell reality anymore.
This room so small.
Will i get out?
Can you save me now?
A contest entry
- just sitting around staring at walls? by amaranthine lover.
1520 points, ended January 1, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
im not to great but what do u think?
Comments
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this is how i feel. i love to read your poems!
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emotional, and very deep... i love it. well done
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Nicely penned, I think you caught the emotional breakdown rather well.
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not bad. why are you trapped? and who is saving you? these are questions in need answers to.
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yes, i can.
haha....
im wonderwoman =]
u know it.
iloveyou =]
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