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What You've Done

I don't know the hardships
of people across the world
I don't know the problems
That in a stranger's life unfurled
I just know the struggles going on between me and you
You took everythign I worked for
I don't know what to do
You took the one thing I still had
Sometimes I wonder if you knew
The thing you did was bad

-Pet

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-Pet

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  • redhanded
    December 18, 2008

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    such an intense piece, short and to the point. full of some pretty good emotions here. keep up the good work cant wait to read more!