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Big Day

Brash Brain,
Tooth Tied,
(Browse Belt);
Tease Tempts
Big Boy;
Beaut Bends
Black Beards.
Blown Bart!
Fresh Friend-
Fast Fun,
You're Young!

Author notes

Mono-meter; (And not Pyrrhic Mono-meter either)! Spondaic Mono-meter.

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  • CitrineSunrise gold member
    December 29, 2008
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    Intriguing and unusual. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz