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Listen

I hope you suffocate on your wise words
Cause right now all I need is to  hear is screaming
I'm so done with listening
Cause you never even tried to hear
What I had to say

And you keep on talking
And keep on going on
And I don't want to hear it
I know I made mistakes
I know I made the wrong choice
I'M SORRY

Author notes

idk random not really to do with anything

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  • meggie94x
    December 19, 2008

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    BAHHH i hope this isnt about a certain someone cause if so u are lil miss hypocritical.

    good tho


  • MusicIsMyLifeline
    December 19, 2008

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    *choice

    "Cause right now all I need is to screaming"
    shld this be all i need is screaming
    or
    all i need is to scream
    ?

    otherwise really good. love the first line