Has anyone ever sat and watched a scary video game?
I think they're unhealthy, don't you feel the same?
I sit there staring at the screen as my family plays
I'm amazed and dazed
Then a scary monster jumps out
And scares me into a pout
Slimy, creepy, crawly, and loud
They make me scream like a cow
Doesn't anyone warn you
About them jumping out without cue?!
Pixilated nightmares haunt my dreams
I swear I can still hear my screams!
I think they're unhealthy, don't you feel the same?
I sit there staring at the screen as my family plays
I'm amazed and dazed
Then a scary monster jumps out
And scares me into a pout
Slimy, creepy, crawly, and loud
They make me scream like a cow
Doesn't anyone warn you
About them jumping out without cue?!
Pixilated nightmares haunt my dreams
I swear I can still hear my screams!
Author notes
Haha, this piece was inspired by a joke me and some friends came up with in psychology. So I dedicate this to you guys!!!! And well when I was little I'd watch the scary games my family members played, and would have nightmares LOL
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Comments
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"Slimy, creepy, crawly, and loud
They make me scream like a cow"
Brilliant lines. Lol
I hate scary games, fatal frame is the worst for me, closely followed by silent hill the room. Getting attacked by ghosts and mutant zombies is not my idea of fun, but RE4 rocked the planet.
Good job, and good luck to you in the contest.


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lol screaming like a cow...that really made me laugh
this is cute...in a good way
thanks for entering -
what does it sound like when a cow screams exactly?
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Hard to explain. Starts off like a moo then gets high pitched like cat claws on a chalkboard LOL
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rofl, ok I can picture it now
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oh yes
when we were young and willing to play games we use to scare each other into frenzies, now like you do... memories are the good times gone, thank you for this entry
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funny you have a great chance of winning this contest
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Ha Ha, this is sweetly funny. great rhyme, great flow and i love the background!


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Haha aawww poor baby lol This was funny apart from the images haunting your dreams ofcourse. Great poem hun xx
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