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Spirit Child

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Wears a heart of gold upon his sleeve
Pens legends with love’s inked quill
Creating passion driving one insane
Weaving words with magnetic thrills

Yet innocence infuses his very core
Gentle kindness escorts his features
Sincerity in spirit constructs trust
Crafts a bond like an angelic creature

Wholesomely transparent is his gift
His wicked humor instills such a smile
A caring chap of poetic addictions
Out witting the mind in his free style

To read his words is to read his mind
As he grows a bit older in physique
The heart remains forever young
his spirit child dwells soft and unique


Author notes

For Mark,

Happy Birthday my good friend.

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  • Topnotchsy
    March 1

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    Beautiful tribute. This is the third poem of yours I've checked out and I love how you always have a picture to go along with the poem. It gives the poem a dimension that most poems on the site don't have.

  • This is a most beautiful dedication for him... Very soft, and sincere. Nicely penned! Thank you so much for your entry!

  • Liquid memories
    December 21, 2008

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    GRACIOUS

    Loverly thoughts for a special poet that cares about othetrs. hope he enjoy the thoughts, loving expressions made. very sweet.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    You introduce the reader to someone we would like to be acquainted with in his writings....You have concisely penned the imagery filled qualities of his scribing....A tribute of merit for his birthday!


    • ScarletO gold member
      December 19, 2008
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      It is his birthday and this is my gift to him. He is NICE. Thanks for your comment.


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    OMG I love this this....
    Thank you.

    It flows AND makes me

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