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Grady.

Unforgiven, So forgotten,
God's unwanted child,
broken hearted,
spirit rotten,
still don't want to face the world,
he loves me, or he loves her?
My life will never be the same,
my world flipped with three small words,
and yet I feel it's just his game.

Never love,
never forget,
every word,
we ever said,
flooding through my aching head,
forcing me, to wish for death,
never understanding,
that all I said was true,
you couldn't wait for my heart,
I couldn't wait for you.

I pledge my love and all I have,
to your loving soul,
to wrap my arms around you,
and take away the cold,
I give my heart to thee,
I give it all to you,
every time a piece breaks off,
grab the staples and some glue,
it's already so fragile,
so broken and so scarred,
it can almost match the memories,
burned into my arms.

Sleeping little child,
forgotten in time,
dream just for a while,
and then wake up to find,
the nightmares are reality,
all the love,
is in your dreams,
happiness is just a myth,
to replace your screams.

Broken little baby,
bleeding in the night,
fighting back the tears,
with all her little might,
the razorblades are breaking,
and bending with the use,
the smiles she keeps faking,
she's the only to lose,
don't ever let them hear you,
don't ever let them see,
i'm a big girl,
I don't need love,
i'll just shut up and bleed.

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Alrighty Darlin. Written a while back. Never posted.

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  • RebelSoldier
    December 18, 2008
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    i like it
    and
    im sorry


  • NoFaith.And.NoHeart
    December 18, 2008
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    good job sav sav


  • JaydinC
    December 18, 2008

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    I like this one as well. It's very desperate, very charged, almost frantic in the way it flows. I think it conveys exactly what you felt when you wrote this very well. Good job once again