In this life of darkness i have no hope.
Forgive me for i have done wrong.
But is this truly the life for me?
This life of never ending darkness.
Dear god i know now that only you can brightin up this world.
So please answer this prayer and bring me light.
Luminate my world and keep me warm.
Its always cold and dark here.
Save me now and keep me safe.
Inside i feel so useless but you keep me here.
With this light so bright i will live forever.
For you are my lord and will forever keep me safe.
A contest entry
- the light... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 27, 2008, 7 entries
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im not to great but what do u think?
Comments
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wow... thats good... i love this one a lot. you've got talent, don't ever think otherwise. well done 
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Amen..HIS blessings indeed will make us the peaceful and strong ..beautiful sentiments of the heart are here to inspire the readers..well done..
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Often times we feel this way...great words to capture the emotion.
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