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My Gift To U

Luscious lips, delectable hips
Your beautiful body has me taking trips
Up and down your avenues of passion
Kissing you, licking you, loving your reaction

Giving you the satisfaction that you so deserve
You’re a real woman that’s ahead of the curve
You don’t ask for nothing so I give you everything
But most importantly you feel the warmth that I bring

I love to feel your warmth when I’m inside you
I love to touch your body when I’m lying beside you
I need you close to me, girl you mean the most to me
In your arms with your loving is where I chose to be

You can rest assured that your heart won’t be broken
My heart was mended when you gave me your token
Accepting me for who I am and thanking the stars above
That you found a man who can give you real love

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  • i am truly scared of you.i am also glad that i'm old enough to be your mother or i would probably be stalking you.


  • geckogirl silver member
    December 22, 2008
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    this must be for one very special lady....


  • lovinhim
    December 21, 2008

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    Wow!!!

    You did it again lol I love everyword of it Mo you are great with your words.... Mmm keep it up


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    yeah, nice

    Another sensually yet tender write from the master of Mo-love, excellent write kid!


    • moluv10
      December 19, 2008
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      thanks for your comments as always bro. i feed off of your energy so keep on bringin the heat homie!

  • The D O M
    December 19, 2008
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    Tenderly sensual, filled with love and person feeling, Excellent poetry!


    • moluv10
      December 19, 2008
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      thanks for your coments and hosting this contest. good luck judging.

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    December 18, 2008
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    Smiles...

    Sweet, saucy, sincere and sentimental. Liked the lyrical flow and the warmth of the inner glow.


    • moluv10
      December 19, 2008
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      tank you so much for your comments my friend. they mean a lot to me. best wishes to you.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    omfg! i so love this dude you really did a very nice job with this i enjoyed this a whole lot honey i am fanning myself good luck in the contest


    • moluv10
      December 19, 2008
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      thank you so much hon. much love to you.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    I so love this hon and I really enjoyed this read! Good luck in the contest!


    • moluv10
      December 19, 2008
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      i take your comforting words to heart hon and accept them graciously. much love to you.

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