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Looking for Someone

Looking for someone who would
Love me for what I am
Yet never stop trying
In making me a perfect man...

Looking for someone to whom
I can disclose my darkest side
And yet be made to feel
A human, not a demon from inside...

Looking for someone who will
Cry leaning on my shoulder
Though I may be the one
Who had really hurt her....

Looking for someone who will
Love me day and night.
Who will show even her anger
Through kisses, when we fight...



TO BE CONTINUED

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  • angel-lover
    August 28, 2009
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    came back for another read of your work well done xx


  • angel-lover
    January 25, 2009

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    hi Nirmal wow this is brilliant it captured me till the end I wanted it to never end very well written piece ...


  • baawri
    December 31, 2008

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    Hope you find her. Awesome write. Dont have much words. It speaks expressions unexpressed by all. Lovely poem.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    December 29, 2008
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    I like what you have so far. We all look for that kind of love in one way or another. I believe it's called agape, Greek for unconditional/true love. Sometimes you just have to let love find you, instead of chasing it. The kind you chase is mostly never real, but the kind that finds you usually is.