The record skipped a beat, my heart did too,
& when you s n a pp e d the cd in half
//...so did my p a t h e t i c little heart...//
because that's
....the kind of spiteful thing you DO!
When you turn it UP
It so turns me ON
& when you C U T I T OFF ..[I'm dead for good]
A N Y T H I NG to get to me [You defiantly would]
So you change my mood by switching songs.
.......I live off the music........
& you K N O W T H I S
so you pause the music to shut me up
and you stop it all together to s p o i l my luck
I'm
attatched
to this music
so don't s t o p i t
because you k n o w y o u CAN!
Author notes
I had random inspiration! recently into dirty pretty
In a list
A contest entry
- Peer Pressure Contest!! You decide the trophy winners!! by Zenda-Lokki.
1700 points, ended January 7, 77 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DIRTY [P.r.e.t.t.y] WHORE by Candy Morphine.
550 points, ended January 6, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT!!!
-i liked it=].
the way you spin music into the poem is invaluable!! amazing. this is one of the best dirtypretty poems i've read in a long while.
this is definatly going to the finalists list!
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Wow very original I love the form, excellent write
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That random inspiration you had made for a really lovely piece then! I love poetry about music, and I think this one was great.
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Intesting form to write in here hun x I like how it reads like music and flows with ease. Great job xx
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I like the abstract way this piece is written, and the story is inventive. Great job!
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