Oh there we are
L-a-d-i-e-s at Sam's club
you spell
dancing all around Nana
staring down the amazing magical
toilet that flushed
when the door open or closed
perched on the seat
holding my hands
sharing ballerina dreams
showing off tinker bell panties
soaping our hands at the sink
that came from a castle
says you
magic water waving your hands through.
pulling lollipop pieces out of your hair
no tears
under the dryer we go
Adventure is going to the potty with you!!
while Santa is shopping.
Author notes
The joy of my life grand daughters !
A contest entry
- Happy Moments by Good Mourning Moon.
700 points, ended December 26, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow
This is touching Rheea, I truely like the way you shared your happy moments and Congradulations on the Silver. Well deserved and love the picture, she so cute. All the best and keeping them flowing,
Michele
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Wonderful
Very well done. A great creation for the contest. Congratulations on the silver.
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I love this poem! It is magical... it disguises a really cool story in poetry
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Thank you so much for loving my grand daughter ! and the silver.
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There are things that keep our lives from falling apart, this is one of them. Beautifully expressed love for your grands, I'm sure they love you just as much. Endure and adore...
All my love,
Brazos
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lol - I love this poem! You must be a very pround Nana! Taking my 2 girls to rr is an adventure too, though usually it's because I'm having to explain patiently that we don't flush sister's dolly down the potty etc
Kids are so much fun 
nice work
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I would have never guessed there was so much fun going on there, very cute.
Best wishes in the contest
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Sam;s Club have the best free samples. I go just to get a meal.
Love this look at life.
joe
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and you had no idea Joe that with that meal a free show went on in the Loo!! she is the oldest sticking her tongue out at my camera the little mess.
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they sound like good girls, going to the potty is an unusual subject but I was totally involved with the ins and outs of your trip.
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Sounds like you have great fun with them! Happy moments for sure!
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What fun this is - I shall never be able to pass one of those magical loos again without sparkling inside.
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Sweet
"pulling lollipop pieces out of your hair" -
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