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Let's Work It Out!!

I did you wrong,
you did me wrong,
but that doesn't mean
that our love ain't strong,
together we can make
our relationship long,
why it got to end this way,
don't leave me
just hear what I gotta say,
we've been through all the drama,
I've dealt with all your problems,
you've dealt with mine,
and no matter what
I never got out of line,
sure we argue and fuss,
we call names and cuss,
but we always knew what was enough,
our only problem was trust,
but never anytime to discuss,
the importance in this relationship,
or what we could do to make it better,
to last through the wheather,
through the storms of life,
through the agony and strife,
through the ups and downs,
the smiles and frowns,
we had a good thing and it was real,
why you acting like you don't feel what I feel,
like this thing we got can't be healed,
close your eyes and see what I see,
love, family, and you and me,
but remember like the song says,
I did you wrong,
you did me wrong,
I take you back,
you take me back,
so let's just work it out!!

Real Talk:
Let's stop all the drama in our relationships everybody. We need to work out our problems with love and trust and remember that all we got in this world to offer and live byis our word. The children are suffering while we're out fighting with our mates and their outon the streets living in complete confusion because mama got 4 baby daddy's, or daddy got 5 baby mama's and inthe end the child has 9 half siblings that will grow up to hate each other because we can't get along.
Real Talk!!!

Author notes

Just writing what came to the top of my head.

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  • mz.butter
    January 4
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    that is so true

    always remember,if you aint trust you aint got nothing.loved the flow.


  • Pain Angel
    December 20, 2008
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    Hell yeah! Thats some real nigga shit


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    December 20, 2008
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    I guess you comin to life now


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    nice poem hon i think you really did a very great awesome job with this here nice to see you writing again even though this not my problem i am in love honey so the picture you see is of my hot 21 yr old bf


  • hotchocolate gold member
    December 18, 2008

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    A great write from you here and I enjoyed the read! Keep penning hon

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