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Potential

Dear Diary.

Another star falls,
another potentially lit.
My intuition screaming,
my heart lost.
So many doors,
so many options.
Too much --
my head is reeling.

Another star falls
so long, farewell.
Patience is neither virtue
nor mandatory.
A possibility for certain
but not certain enough.


Potential!
But how can it be?

When the star that fell
took the rest of me...

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  • StarIlluminated
    December 18, 2008
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    Woah Emma this is uh-mazing. No seriously it's awesome.

    Favorite lines:

    - Patience is neither virtue
    nor mandatory.


    -Potential!
    But how can it be?

    When the star that fell
    took the rest of me...

    That was an awesome ending line and yeah the whole poem is just awesome.

    *KT*


  • luckypoet7
    December 18, 2008
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    great job