i thought you were cool
i really liked you
you made me laugh
you made me smile
you told you liked me
you asked me out
i said yes.
we went on a date
i thought it was great
but when you asked me to smoke pot
i thought
he smokes pot?
my opinion of you went downhill
i told you no
you asked me why
because i'm not like that.
you look annoyed
i was crushed
i thought you were cool he said
i am, your not.
take me home
no, he said. i'm not ready to leave yet
fine
i turned my back and walked out the door
i didn't want to look at you any more
i began my walk home and thought to myself
i deserve better than that
Author notes
AN UNFORTUNATE EVENT. ONE I DON'T CARE TO REPEAT
A contest entry
- Give me your break-up poems by trekkergirl.
400 points, ended January 5, 2009, 80 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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you did the right thing, walking away is the best thing to do. liked da poem.
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ive done that, been in your position anyways, but having nowhere to go, i stayed. it sucked, kinda wish i would have walked anywhere. cause like you said, you just dont want to look a them anymore.
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