I can't get it out of my head,
my mind running circles round what happened today.
Why can't I forget what was said?
My eyes seeing it in an ever-looped replay.
I wonder what this feeling is,
sitting uneasily under my skin?
I wonder if this feeling's his,
transferred psychically from feelings within.
If this lasts much longer I will melt away.
Feeling these emotions I won't last a day.
Hold on to this moment it won't get away.
Searching for solutions I will find someday.
I'm searching for- a word that lies
mischievously beneath my tongue;
-the answer hiding in your eyes
that murmurs in your heart and lungs;
-a solution that satisfies
the equation my heartbeat has sung;
-the reason that justifies
the heartache that has just begun.
If this lasts much longer I will melt away.
Feeling these emotions I won't last a day.
Hold on to this moment it won't get away.
Searching for solutions we will find someday.
Craving the attention of a sideways glance
[another word, just one more chance]
I find that you're distracted by me too.
Our eyes are locked together in a moment's trance,
[a burning look, hypnotic dance]
but skit away before the truth shines through.
The word I couldn't find today finds me in a rush:
the attractive force between us two that makes us want to touch.
The class we're in is such a hint I finally can see,
the word I couldn't find before was the Chemistry.
If this lasts much longer I will melt away.
Feeling these emotions I won't last a day.
Hold on to this moment it won't get away.
Finding the solution that was lost today.
Author notes
This is supposed to be a song, and the title is a triple meaning. So... please comment! Critically too, but I also just love comments. I will explain this circumstances later maybe...
This is supposed to be a song, whaddaya think?
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danny allways has some pointless imput, i think he should take a class that teaches you when to shut the hell up. but i love the poem/songy thingy, it made me teehee lol four thumbs up(if i had them)
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(What's Danny's problem? You guys disagree a lot about stuff on here, don't you?)
^_^ Yay you finished it. Te gusta quimica mucho. To state the obvious again. Sorry.
Anyways, I like your songwriting, uh...(looks at name)...Miss KireiAkayukiTsukino...I like the name change but it's lengthy as hell...Um...that's it for now. I'mm allowed on the computer but my time's almost up already so I need to go.
Hasta luego mi amiga.
(Me encanta espanol, but my keyboard needs to upside down question marks and the curvy things above the N and oh well. XD)
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LOL
?Quien es espanol? Miguel? My Keyboard is also lacking the upside down question mark and the (I think it's called a ) tilde. And seeing as the squiggly red line didn't appear beneath the word "tilde" I'm assuming it's right =]. Ahahah, Yeah, I thought it was kinda long. I was considering just Akayuki Tsukino, but it was still long
. Hm.
Si, hasta MANANA, mi amiga. ( foreshadowing? (tee hee, manana (like banana)))
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Good poem. But fuck you. I can say what I want about who I want, because we live in America and I am protected by the First Amendment to the Constitution, so SUCK IT.
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heh heh heh I think I totally know who this is about
Lol you go girl!
(Don't worry. I'm sure most people wouldn't guess it.) -
been a while since i seen something from you but good to see that you haven't lost a step a wonderful song/poem i have to think about the meaning thou, but that is just me, keep it flowing.
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thanks for the comment =] It was purposefully a little vague. Did the poem/song seem short to you at all? Looking back at it it seems woefully lacking. I'll notify you if I ever decide to elaborate upon the circumstances surrounding this, so keep an eye out. =]
~the Euphoric Weaver
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