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I Wear it like a Tattoo

I yearn to belong home
Where my path started
Where my path ended
I have it deep under my skin
Ink and Blood
Several shapes, many realities
Only one Soul
Like the scare of age
I wear my soul like a tattoo
Sign of my past fights as warrior
Symbol of my past tricks as wizard
I polish my armour
and now it shines in my eyes

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Behrns

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    January 3

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    Thank you

    for your submission to this contest. I do find this poem to be well done but do suggest a slight review for flow. As you can see, I still appreciate its beauty and depth as I have placed it among the finalists.


  • Dark Otter
    December 22, 2008
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    Welcome!

    To wear ones heart on one sleeve is much like a tattoo, a visual representation of who we are.


  • Valley Girl silver member
    December 20, 2008

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    welcome to All Poetry

    A very personal write. Showing the reader a part of you. You have added great imagery to this piece. Thanks for sharing.
    Sarah
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  • queen Moderators member
    December 18, 2008

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    Welcome to all poetry

    Hi Behrns

    This is so good i love it you have such a great way with words please keep writing, reading and commenting
    Barbara
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