Humble
and giving to
poets of allpoetry
paitent and kind
your always there for us
brother your always there for me
I could not thank you enough
really you mean a lot to me
though sometimes you can be quite stubborn
honest and true you still remain
determined to help others blossom
as poets as
you have yourself quite well
may your special day be
a way for all of us to express
really how important you are to us.
keeping you in my thoughts
Love,
Molly
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday!!!! (~markgrif~) by PerfectImperfection.
1350 points, ended January 7, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Molly.
When you gonna write something new?
lub ya! -
very well done
a creative way to pen this
great work Molly -
Nicely done, a sweet write for him. Thank you for entering!
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Awww thank you so much Molly.
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pretty nifty little birthday write!
sounds like something i'd like to get from a friend on my birthday.
though I have found two mistakes:
"your always there for us
brother your always there for me "
i think the "your" is supposed to be "you're"
other than that, it is a awesome write.
God bless,
hugs and love,
K
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