Sweet solace of despair, the grief is flowing
in waves across the passages of time.
I search and yet the stars that once were glowing
have faded to a mist within my mind.
Against the silent winds, beneath the hollows
companions of my youth have drifted on.
And no one leads me home, I cannot follow--
the roads that I once traveled are now gone.
Please tell me what you think
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How perfect. It captures my mood completely and you said it better than I ever could have.
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great emotion here, I sure understand feeling that way too/
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Your sonneteer spirit comes through in this piece. The beat is there with perfect rythm and rhyme. A most enjoyable read.
Sam
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Promise ... sing
Wistful deserving greater recognition - perhaps some inversion in the last line
wild roads which once I traveled now are gone
On another subject - Happy New Year - I'm surprised your Meadow Moments has not attracted attention for over 3 years
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fab-u-lous
Mary,
You never dissappoint a reader, though short this piece is filled with strong emotion and smooth wording- you continue to impress me with your work my friend..Merry Christmas to you and yuors Mary...peace Terry
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