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Stories From the Dead

I'd give what I have ,
To have what I've lost,
But its way to late,
& its already gone.

My relationship is white hot,
...what we had was even stronger,
Love fades fast...
Friendship is supposed to be longer.




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  • Crystal-Marie
    February 10

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    i LOVED it!!
    i really like the part wher u said...
    "Love fades fast...
    Friendship is supposed to be longer"
    to me thats the climax.... the strongest part.
    THNKS


  • starving4perfection
    December 25, 2008

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    me thinks this is very good =D well done! so short yet intense....with alot of meaning from my point of view.