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A Child's Point of View

Where in life can we find more beauty
than free spirits travelling open plains?
Breath of life brought forth out of the rising sun,
in a statement of glory rising above all.

Touching all creation in a single beat
through sight and sound
thundering hooves move the earth
in a drum roll of majestic splendor.

Specific intentions simplistically designed
caressing and captivating the inquisitive mind,
misunderstood because of
who, what, where, when, how, and why.

Moving about where the wind blows
grazing upon nature's bounty.
Time stands still, though life progresses,
for all creatures of nature.

Markings upon the sky's mural
mere communication amongst the clouds,
giving fair warning of pleasure or dismay
of what to expect coming our way.


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  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    December 30, 2008

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    such a beautiful piece you have written...a picture of wonder for the minds eyes to meditate upon...thank you so much for entering


  • LittleMoon silver member
    December 19, 2008
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    Very beautiful, like a painting with words. Sheila